hey jazz ;) , i really like the colour scheme, the front and your use of photography for your front cover, it shows you have really thought about your genre, however you could of put a skyline to represent the genre of your magazine. i like the contents page also and the photography for it also, it could also be better if you done the contents page landscape, but it still looks good portrait. The DPS photography is really good and i like the pull out quote on the said, and the positioning of your journalistic piece is nice.
firstly i would like to say that i really like the image ou have places on the front cover but the colour scheme in your front cover is completely different to your content page, for example the colour of your master head is orange/yellow colour but the one in your contents page is blue. i really like the overall look of your magazine but you could look at this and do something about it if nessessary. i also like the way you layed out all your images in your content page and the quality of your pictures are amazing!
Front cover: i like the fact tha you used a black and white phtot and how you kept the colours simple but using a gold with white looks good. Content page: you have used enough images which is good as there is four. the layout is also quite good and i like the text of the font throught your whole magazine. DPS: I like tha fact that one page has a large image which is good.
Overall i think you use enough images and have good location shots, i would pay £2.99 for this magazine. i also think your genre of your magazine is good and will atttract majority of the audience who are into jazz.
I love the way you've gone for something diffrent and kept your picture balck and white the colours you have used for your masthead really stand out. I think the barcode should have been smaller. The layout of the contents page is nice as you have keept it simple. The DPS is also good but I think you should have added more pictures and colour.
hey jazz ;) , i really like the colour scheme, the front and your use of photography for your front cover, it shows you have really thought about your genre, however you could of put a skyline to represent the genre of your magazine. i like the contents page also and the photography for it also, it could also be better if you done the contents page landscape, but it still looks good portrait. The DPS photography is really good and i like the pull out quote on the said, and the positioning of your journalistic piece is nice.
ReplyDeleteI really like your Front Cover i think everything works very well togeher
ReplyDeleteI think the images on your contents page need to be better arranged as it just looks abit clustered
I really like your DPS however i just think you need to make your font a little bit bigger
Photography - i really like your photography
Layout - you've really though about your layout and this is reflective throughout your whole magazine
Jouranlism - very good
I think that you've reflected the genre very well and you can see clearly what the genre is
colour scheme - really like it
firstly i would like to say that i really like the image ou have places on the front cover but the colour scheme in your front cover is completely different to your content page, for example the colour of your master head is orange/yellow colour but the one in your contents page is blue. i really like the overall look of your magazine but you could look at this and do something about it if nessessary.
Deletei also like the way you layed out all your images in your content page and the quality of your pictures are amazing!
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ReplyDeleteFront cover: i like the fact tha you used a black and white phtot and how you kept the colours simple but using a gold with white looks good.
ReplyDeleteContent page: you have used enough images which is good as there is four. the layout is also quite good and i like the text of the font throught your whole magazine.
DPS: I like tha fact that one page has a large image which is good.
Overall i think you use enough images and have good location shots, i would pay £2.99 for this magazine. i also think your genre of your magazine is good and will atttract majority of the audience who are into jazz.
I love the way you've gone for something diffrent and kept your picture balck and white the colours you have used for your masthead really stand out. I think the barcode should have been smaller. The layout of the contents page is nice as you have keept it simple. The DPS is also good but I think you should have added more pictures and colour.
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