Monday, 31 December 2012

Wednesday, 26 December 2012

Monday, 10 December 2012

Task 10 feedback on finished magazine

Looking at my college magazine how have my technical skills improved on indesign and photoshop?

Task 10 feedback on finished magazine

What could be improved?

Task 10 feedback on finished magazine

Which elements of the magazine do you as the audience like?

Task 10 Feedback on finished magazine



I've tried to use a variety of different ethnic groups, have you noticed this? does it work?
Do you think im stereotyping the genre of Jazz?
I've used a variety of age groups, does this work well?
I've included both male and female models, how well does this represent the genre of Jazz music?

Task 10 Feedback on finished magazine

Who are the audience? Are they the group that you initially targeted?

Friday, 7 December 2012

Front cover, cover page and dps (fixed according to audience feedback)

Cover page



Left hand side of contents page                                    Right hand side of contents page




Double Page Spread

After receiving the feeback and taking it into consideration I changed parts of the magazine, I tried a few different blue and purple tones for the text on the cover page but from a distance I wasnt able to read it so I kept it the goldy colour it originally was. Many magazines feature an editors note and it had been said that it would improve my magazine if i were to make a landscape contents page so i took that on board and made that change.