From the feedback ive received from my teacher ive made minor adjustments.
On my cover page, I corrected the spelling mistakes I had and put the models head infront of the mastehead.
As for the contents page I added another column and rearranged the pictures I also corrected my spelling mistakes and edited my editors note so that there wasnt any '-' symbols at the end of a line.
For the DPS I added the magazine logo at the bottom the page, corrected my spelling mistakes and got rid of the picture that wasnt really necessary.
